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I’m
waiting for your shadow
to darken the doorway.
©2007-2009 ~singsorrow
:iconsingsorrow:

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mind poem 8
Friend or foe?

30 July, 07

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:iconbirdalie:
thats a surprisingly strong poem to be so short, well done!

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You're gonna wanna get where you're gonna wanna be
:iconsingsorrow:
Thank you very much! :)
:iconbirdalie:
;)

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You're gonna wanna get where you're gonna wanna be
:iconanderon:
I'm always amazed when a writer conveys a strong image with minimal words. The point of a haiku, I know, but many writers fail miserably with haiku (shortest form of poetry I know). This, this is amazing.

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A sincere smile is worth more than gold, and a true friend is worth more than the most precious of gems.

~Askoga - Scrap gallery!
:iconsingsorrow:
Goodness, your comment made me all tingly. Thank you. :)
:iconanderon:
Glad I could have such an effect! I really like this poem. It's my favorite of the ones of yours I've read (which are more than I've commented on).

I'm careful about my commenting, because I well know how sensitive some writers and artists are. Thus, if I have much bad to say (normally my "bad" is what I consider to be helpful. Others do not often see it as such), or have not been truly moved by a piece, I probably won't comment on it.

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A sincere smile is worth more than gold, and a true friend is worth more than the most precious of gems.

~Askoga - Scrap gallery!
:iconsingsorrow:
I don't feel that I'm sensitive to critique as such. If it helps my writing get better I'm all for it. The only way I'd get upset about comments is if someone was to come up and just say 'Crap' without telling me why.
:iconanderon:
Hee hee, I can promise you I'll never do that. It's not helpful at all, and I'm all about being helpful.

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A sincere smile is worth more than gold, and a true friend is worth more than the most precious of gems.

~Askoga - Scrap gallery!
:iconzenatz19:
So simple, yet so utterly powerful. So much emotion is conveyed...:faint:

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ad astra

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